This is something that has gone over and over in my mind and I feel like I need to write it now. So yeah, under the cut is a romantic short story. I think it’s romantic anyway… I don’t know… maybe it’s just another piece of the human experience.
First off, this is well written and people should read it. It’s in first person. But if I can work passed that so can you.
It’s odd in some places. But it’s a short story so it’s to be expected. Short stories always make me ask questions. Of course, that somebody else can write short stories makes me cry jealous tears because I just can’t. Everything I write is either a drabble or it goes on forever and ever. Still, guys, give it a read. And then tell her that it’s a beautiful piece of literature.